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PostSubject: Black death    Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:33 pm

"lost your shadow?"

Alex W. Blast



[b]===IDENTITY===

Full Name: Alex.w.blast
Nickname(s):
Codename: Black death
Alias(es):
Age: 15
Classification: altered human
Affiliation: neutral
Birthday: oct. 29 1996

===PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION===

Hair Color: ice white with black
Eye Color: gray
Height: 5'11
Weight: 130
Other Traits: on the turning point of good and evil


===POWERS===


Powers: Shadow manipulation:

*Shadow able to contorl shadows and dark matter and change thiers shapes into almost any shape. shadows are able to physicaly hurt or effect people, they can be used like weapons, they can become solid and thrown around.

*Shadow Protection, used to create shadow force fields that can protect up to 1 ton of pressure. But it using any of his powers during the day it causes any of his shadows to be weaker there for haveing a lesser effct.

weekness: day (due to lack of darkness) cause's power to weaken. Alex will hardly trust anyone, he thinks most people come off a little shady (pun intended) and doesn't like team work. So It's rare for him to be on a team and take orders.

Equipment: back Hover bord able to go up to 195 mph.


===PSYCHOLOGICAL PROFILE===


Personality: keeps to him sealf untill u get to know him.


Strengths: good at hand to hand fighting 8 years of tae-kwonk-do training


Interests/Habits: likes to be out side at night. dose tae-kwon-do and plays gu


===PERSONAL BACKGROUND===


Family Members: mom and dad (who left him ata vary eary age)
Place of Origin: the quiet streets of north carolina
Current City: Jumpcity
History: he spent his whole child hood nothing know about his family. he was rasied in a foster home untill the day he discoverd his strange powers. his foster family scared by his power kicked him out on the streets at age 13 where he took care of him sealf. at age 13 he fond a tae-kwon-do school wich accepted him despite his powers. and trained for sevral years
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PostSubject: Re: Black death    Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:38 pm

Claimed!

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PostSubject: Re: Black death    Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:26 pm

Okay first off, you have to fill out classification (That's Human, Altered human, alien, etc.)

There's black in his hair too (By the hair line) put that in the description too.

Other Traits are physical appearances.

Do the Shadows cause physical damage? Can he cover things up with it like an actual shadow?

Personalty needs to be a bit more descriptive. I know your working on it but you need to be more descriptive.

How many years of hand to hand fighting?

Interest and Habits: He has to have some! Just because you haven't started to roleplay doesn't mean he doesn't have interest or habits.

You took out weaknesses? he had to has some! Physical ( like water is to fire) and some can be mentally.

He must have family members, just a mom and dad would be fine.

Place of Origin, Just because he doesn't know doesn't mean you shouldn't have it on the app. (It can be a real state)

History: It needs to be at least a paragraph long.

After you fix these problems i'll check it again and see if it's good~

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PostSubject: i edited it   Mon Aug 20, 2012 10:34 pm

i edited it. its not perfect yet.
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PostSubject: ........   Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:16 pm

still working on history as u can tell
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PostSubject: Re: Black death    Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:30 pm

History is fine.

Weakness: I need another weakness. How does the day affect him? Does it make his powers weaker? Does it hurt him physically?

I would recommend giving him a way for transportation. It doesn't have to be a power. (Motorcycle, hover board, car, etc.)

If you fix these things correctly I'll be able to Approve it!

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PostSubject: Re: Black death    Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:58 pm

WOOT GOOD JOB! THIS IS OFFICIALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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